Bil
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I fought very hard against becoming a John/Elizabeth shipper but to no avail. I am completely converted. And have only myself to blame. *Sigh* :)

You can also find my stuff on fanfiction.net under the same penname, along with non-Sparky and non-Atlantis stories.
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Reviews by Bil
Rating: PG-13
Genres: Angst, Episode Prologues & Epilogues
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 440
Summary: Post-The Hot Zone. Elizabeth and John have a conversation regarding his conduct.
Published: May 16, 2005   Updated: May 16, 2005
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1

That was seriously good. Really, really good. I love the lines "This is way past high school. This is graduate school and a third Masters degree and retirement all rolled into one." Great fic!

Rating: PG
Genres: General, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Fluff & Slush, Missing Scene, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 642
Summary: Set after 38 Minutes, Major Sheppard gets a visitor. Have insulin standing by.
Published: May 16, 2005   Updated: May 16, 2005
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: n/a

Very cool fic! I loved how they could say so much with so few words. The 'peaceful but lonely' comment was great and I really liked the description before that. Great fic!

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Fluff & Slush, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 855
Summary: Of all the people to be spending the evening with, she'd chosen him. Spoilers for Rising and Letters from Pegasus
Published: July 27, 2005   Updated: July 27, 2005
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Venustas

Lovely little story. I like this take on the end to Simon and Elizabeth's relationship and I like how you wrote John and Elizabeth.

"He also noticed that you liked to hover." Lol! Very true.

Great fic!

Rating: G
Genres: General, Drabble, Missing Scene
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 148
Summary: "It is with great pleasure that I bestow upon you the responsibilities, the respect, and the rank of Lieutenant Colonel." Intruder spoilers. drabble.
Published: August 05, 2005   Updated: August 05, 2005
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Three Rs 1/1

I love this story! It's the perfect way for John to get his promotion, quiet and low key. But that last line is the best, it's just brilliant and so very *John*.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: General, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Vignettes, Other/Misc
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 933
Summary: "You wanna explain to me what all that 'Captain Kirk' crap was about?" Sanctuary post-ep.
Published: August 15, 2005   Updated: August 15, 2005
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: For What it's Worth 1/1

Awesome story! (But then I look up at the author's name and say 'well, of course it is...') I love this way of John finding out when Elizabeth's birthday is; fascinating that Rodney of all people would know it but you make me believe it's possible.

So many great lines in this. I love Rodney's "Because Elizabeth wasn't" response and his thoughts about John and Elizabeth and how they're 'made for each other' with their denseness. But oh, poor Rodney; good on him for wanting Elizabeth to be happy. I really love the line "equations were infinitely preferable to emotions"; that's a very Rodney line and beautifully put.

This is a great story and I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you!

Rating: PG
Genres: Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Introspective, Vignettes, Other/Misc
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1003
Summary: In a job like theirs, there were no guarantees. She knew that as well as he did. Intruder post-ep. spoilers for Intruder and Siege 3.
Published: August 21, 2005   Updated: August 21, 2005
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: No Guarantees 1/1

Wonderful story. You've caught the characters so beautifully and this scene fits in so well into canon. I love the 'burdens of command' comment. The part from "you broke your promise" to "I'll try" is absolutely brilliant; I love the dialogue and the description. Excellent story. Thank you!

Rating: G
Genres: Drabble, Fluff & Slush, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 102
Summary: Drabble, post-Intruder.
Published: October 11, 2005   Updated: October 11, 2005
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Great story! I love the lip gloss idea :) The line "He barely knew how to live without her now" is beautiful.

Rating: G
Genres: Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Fluff & Slush, Humor, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 852
Summary: He keeps staring at her mouth. The Long Goodbye post-ep. spoilers.
Published: January 15, 2006   Updated: January 15, 2006
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Hypothetically Speaking 1/1

Wonderful, wonderful story! I love the beginning, especially that "Every. Single. Time." And yes, that "I think you should kiss me" is *exactly* John's kind of seat-of-the-pants idiotic solution :) I love the line "It makes a warped sort of sense, Elizabeth admits, if they choose to ignore the gaping flaws in his logic." The 'you need to be closer' echoing of the episode is a nice touch. Great, great story! I loved it.

Rating: PG
Genres: Episode Prologues & Epilogues
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1830
Summary: Set after 'The Long Goodbye'
Published: February 11, 2006   Updated: February 11, 2006
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Brilliant! I love that Rodney managed to hoodwink John so completely - and I love the result! I bet Elizabeth isn't complaining either :) This story is a lot of fun, yet the ending was beautifully fluffy; I love the "But you are different" stuff. Favourite line "If by coming here and talk you mean hide in my quarters and sulk, than yeah."

Great story, I loved it!

Rating: PG
Genres: General, Angst, Drama, Missing Scene
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 576
Summary: Response to 5 Minute Fic Challenge: Time Stopped posted on Jumperbay looking for a story written in 5 minutes containing the phrase "And that's when time stopped." Ficlet tag to Siege 2. Complete.
Published: May 15, 2006   Updated: May 15, 2006
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: End of Time

Really nice rendering of the scene from Siege. Good fic.

Past Featured StoryRating: PG
Genres: General, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1447
Summary: "After all this time he still hasn't learnt how anyone could say no to her." My first fic in very, very, very long time, so not be too cruel. General spoilers from season 1 and 2 up 'till Long Goodbye.
Published: June 02, 2006   Updated: June 02, 2006
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: chapter 1

Really nice story. I love this version of what John was thinking through the episodes, I think you did a great job of capturing his character. I particularly liked the line "Just before the Daedalus beams him aboard, he regrets not kissing her" but my favourite line is the beautiful "After all this time he still hasn't learnt how anyone could say no to her." That's just wonderful.

Thank you for the lovely fic.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Angst, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Hurt/Comfort, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 645
Summary: Probably he should leave, let her rest, but John's not ready to let her out of his sight just yet. Spoilers for First Strike.
Published: May 27, 2007   Updated: May 27, 2007
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Proof of Life

Really, really well done. Beautiful and sweet and just really really wonderful. Thank you.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1223
Summary: Clichéd as it sounds, he really does look like he's sleeping. no spoilers.
Published: June 03, 2007   Updated: June 03, 2007
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: June 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really really good story. Painful, but really good. There are some great touches, like Elizabeth wearing John's dogtags, Jinto, the letters, and putting the ashes in that jar. Very good story!

Rating: PG-13
Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed: No
Word count: 6191
Summary: An alternate storyline for Season 5's "Ghost in The Machine". Spoilers for everything up to that. Team friendship with Sparky themes throughout.
Published: August 06, 2008   Updated: August 19, 2008
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sacrifice Brings Salvation

I enjoyed that. I much prefer this story of Elizabeth's wanderings than the one TPTB gave us. Ronon's comment about de-ascending naked was hilarious :) And although I have actually started to like Woolsey, I enjoyed watching everyone decide how to give him the runaround. It's great to have Elizabeth home again!

Past Featured StoryRating: PG
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 799
Summary: After they return from Earth (the real Earth) that first time, he finds himself showing up in her office more and more.
Published: April 12, 2009   Updated: April 12, 2009
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, wow, wow. That's such an amazing story. So short, but saying so very much. And saying it beautifully too! Absolutely wonderful story. I love it!

Rating: G
Genres: Alternate Universe, Episode Prologues & Epilogues
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 518
Summary: Sheppard and Weir meet in the Alternate Universe where 'Vegas' was set.
Published: August 12, 2009   Updated: August 12, 2009
Reviewer: Bil Signed
Date: December 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: After Vegas

Love it! I liked the way you wrote John's thoughts and I love thinking about all the possibilities from this point on. Great fic.

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