Atri
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Reviews by Atri
Rating: PG
Genres: Angst, Drama, Missing Scene
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed: No
Word count: 12935
Summary: This is a missing scene from ‘The Last Man’. I always wondered why John never asked the digitalized Rodney about Elizabeth, so here’s what would have happened if he did.
Published: December 27, 2008   Updated: April 07, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Part 09: Consequences

Great chapter and nice bonding between Elizabeth and Sam. I really liked this.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 4932
Summary: General Hank Landry is intrigued by the unconventional looks shared by Dr. Elizabeth Weir and Lt. Colonel John Sheppard. Can he get to the bottom of this mystery--and employ their power for his own?
Published: February 24, 2009   Updated: February 24, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good story. Always wondered if someone of the Expedition picked up on that look.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Introspective
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed: Yes
Word count: 12342
Summary: What if it was the REAL Elizabeth in the jumper that went down in This Mortal Coil?
Published: March 24, 2009   Updated: April 10, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Really nice ending. A bit abrupt but I liked it very much.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the ending.. it was getting to a point where the muse was starting to get uncooperative so I thought I'd better wind it up rather than have yet another unfinished fic.

Rating: PG
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3017
Summary: Ever wonder if John finished War and Peace? This answers that question and explains what happened afterwards.
Published: April 03, 2009   Updated: April 03, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed
Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. This is how season five should have gone.

Past Featured StoryRating: R
Genres: Smut & Porn
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2935
Summary: John tries to repair a jumper but gets interrupted by Elizabeth.
Published: April 21, 2009   Updated: April 21, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice enjoyable fic. I liked it. Reflects the happier times of the show.

Rating: PG
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 665
Summary: In her place, Steven knows he couldn’t have given that order. Episode addition for Common Ground. Elizabeth/John. Oneshot. Season 3.
Published: April 24, 2009   Updated: April 24, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good ficlet. It's rare that we see Caldwell's POV and this one was very well done.

Rating: G
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1968
Summary: Elizabeth misses John. A familiar item of clothing gives her comfort. Story is better than summary, I promise!
Published: May 21, 2009   Updated: May 21, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice. So much longing and a very good ending. Wonderful characterization. Loved it.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much! :) Glad you liked it.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: General
Warnings: Violence
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed: Yes
Word count: 31903
Summary: John finds the one person he never thought he'd see again....
Set some time in S4 after Trio and Midway, based on the ending of Be All My Sins Remembered. Also contains Sam/Jack, Rodney/Jennifer and slight Daniel/Vala. Please read!
Published: May 26, 2009   Updated: September 26, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Nice beginning. I hope you find the rest of the chapter. Wonder what will happen when they find him. He'll never go back without her.

Author's Response: No he won't. Managed to find the rest of the chapter, I'll try and post it soon!

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed: Yes
Word count: 7689
Summary: John and Elizabeth are back on Earth, Elizabeth is lecturing at Georgetown University when someone tries to kill her.
Published: May 30, 2009   Updated: June 28, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow! Not something I expected with the goa'uld! Good chapter

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Torture
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2423
Summary: Summary: They are the leaders, after all. Everything is their responsibility, their fault, their crime. It’s natural that they should turn to each other. John&Elizabeth friendship.
Published: June 17, 2009   Updated: June 17, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Just Don’t Go

A great fanfic. You portrayed the weight of leadership, the burden of their shared responsibility perfectly. I applaud you.

Rating: M
Genres: Action & Adventure, Drama
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed: Yes
Word count: 64941
Summary: Atlantis finds themselves facing a new and unknown enemy with their only help from a mysterious five year old girl who suddenly appears. John and Elizabeth's relationship will be tested as the expedition must prepare for an oncoming storm of disastrous proportions.
Published: July 13, 2009   Updated: July 28, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In the Beginning

Nice beginning and the girl is interesting. At this point in time, I think that she is either Atlantis, an Ancient made child like Orlin or an ascended form of an alternate Elizabeth. Can't wait until you write more. Good work and keep it up.

Author's Response: Those are some interesting theories, I wish I had those ideas a year ago :)

Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Names, Games and Vanishing Ships

Well, you certainly like to leave us guessing. It gets more interesting with every sentence. Though what the Ancients feared should be a really powerful enemy. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I love leaving cliffhangers :) I try to do it as often as possible.

Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Five Elements (cont)

Great story. Seems fitting that the final element is life. Though if Elizabeth's now pregnant, the IOA will have a fit, regardless of the fact that she and John saved the city.

Author's Response: I know, we've been discussing the possibility of a sequel, but it might not happen for quite some time.

Rating: G
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2293
Summary: A small one shot, an add on to the S5 ep 'The Daedalus Variations'. The ship travels to one more reality before they start their journey home.
Published: July 16, 2009   Updated: July 16, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Truly bittersweet, but I liked it. It would be interesting to see what the alternate Elizabeth thought about this little encounter. Nevertheless, it was a worthy goodbye between them. Good work.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm glad you liked it, and yes, it would be interesting to see what the alternate Elizabeth thought. Maybe one day I'll write a little something that gave that view point. That's a very likely possibility. :) Thanks for reviewing.

Past Featured StoryRating: M
Genres: Action & Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Baby!fic, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed: Yes
Word count: 58712
Summary:

When Elizabeth Weir stepped through the Quantum Mirror to escape the Wraith-Asuran Alliance, her only thought was to keep Jonathan McKay safe. On the other side she finds an Atlantis torn apart by her own death, militarised and half undiscovered, it's true potential lost.

Can she adjust to a new reality and make herself a place in the world all over again? Or will she only ever be a living memorial to the leader they lost? Surrounded by strangers wearing familiar faces, she must come to terms with her loss and embrace her new world, if not for own sake, then for Jonathan and the child she carries within...

Published: August 12, 2009   Updated: September 13, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Her Story

Interesting beginning and alternate universe. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Rating: G
Genres: Action & Adventure, Baby!fic, Future Fic
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed: No
Word count: 28006
Summary: When two teenagers show up in the gateroom and make an astonishing
claim, John must risk everything to get them home, even if it means changing everything that he knows. Set in S5.
Published: September 28, 2009   Updated: July 20, 2015
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nice beginning. Should be interesting to see what you make of it.

Rating: R
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 6901
Summary: Sheppard and Weir have some problems with their memories. What happens in those days they can't remember?
Published: October 02, 2009   Updated: October 02, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. Good characterization. Good job.

Rating: M
Genres: Alternate Universe
Warnings: Character Death
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed: Yes
Word count: 35867
Summary: When Sheppard steps through a shuddering 'Gate, ducking enemy fire, and into the tenuous grip of a flickering wormhole, he emerges on Atlantis, but not the one he left behind...
Published: October 05, 2009   Updated: August 15, 2010
Reviewer: Atri Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Waiting

Interesting beginning.

Rating: PG
Genres: Alternate Universe, Introspective, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 7929
Summary: Particle by particle she slowly changes. AU season 4.
Published: October 29, 2009   Updated: October 29, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cliché or not. This was a good story. Her progress of thinking was very Elizabeth. I liked it. Good job.

Rating: G
Genres: Fluff & Slush, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3616
Summary: Elizabeth wakes up to a life very different from the one she knows, one that may hold the key to revealing what she really wants. Just a small bit of belated Christmas fluff.
Published: December 30, 2009   Updated: December 30, 2009
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

Nice one and just in time for Christmas! Good work!

Rating: M
Genres: Action & Adventure, Angst, Drama, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Hurt/Comfort, Smut & Porn
Warnings: Violence
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: Yes
Word count: 29010
Summary: While John is still recovering in treatment from the Iratus bug retrovirus, another incident with Elizabeth leads to long-standing repercussions in their relationship.
Published: February 16, 2010   Updated: February 16, 2010
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice story. Very well written and in-character. Good work.

Rating: PG
Genres: Angst, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3962
Summary: Summary: Tag to The Ark. Elizabeth is avoiding John and Teyla thinks she might know why. Sparky oneshot.
Published: April 30, 2010   Updated: April 30, 2010
Reviewer: Atri Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Dove, Seeking

Great story. Very good characterization of Teyla. Loved it.

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