Charlie Blue
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Reviews by Charlie Blue
Past Featured StoryRating: PG-13
Genres: Angst, Drama, Introspective, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2288
Summary: Major Sheppard visits Dr Kate Heightmeyer. Contains Sheppard/Teyla.
Published: May 16, 2005   Updated: May 16, 2005
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Inside the Mind of an Air Force Major

OK, so I took a gamble and read this, even if I generally hate and despise any fics, which starts out as John/Teyla. Not even if it is a John/Teyla break up one, with J/E getting together later. Mainly because I am a John/Elizabeth shipper through and through and has been from the very beginning and John only having romantic designs for Elizabeth. But this was an OK one with an OK ending.

It took me until you mentioned Aidan to figure out, that this was set in season 1. You might want to add that for any other confused readers. I pretty sure there's some of those out there.

Rating: M
Genres: Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Fluff & Slush, Humor, Smut & Porn
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2913
Summary: The flirting comes as natural to them now as breathing, and Elizabeth canít help but compare it to quicksand. All she does is stand there and yet she keeps on sinking in deeper and deeper as time goes on. Any resistance to it just seems to make things worse.
Published: March 08, 2008   Updated: March 08, 2008
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was just 15 minutes into watching "Inferno" on DVD last night, before it got too late and I had to find my bed.
When Elizabeth said that "Hot" in that teasing, a bit breathy, tone, I, even watching that episode first time, took note of the taken aback look on John's face, like he wasn't used to hearing that coming out of her mouth. Not to mention the facial expression, as she said it. And then the whole "smitten" exchange.... Not to mention the way she jumped out of her chair and hurridly said she'd go back with him. (Methinks the little greeneyed monster popped up, now that she knew that the lead female sciencetist was "hot" and wasn't keen of John being around a "hot" woman without her around. Just my thought...
Anyway, after that, I should get back to why I'm really here. Namely to leave a review:

I love it. And I would think that under Elizabeth's professional attitude, there's a wicked woman hiding, who can break any rules and regs when she absolutely wants to. And I think that it is only John that brings that kind of mischiviousness in her to the surface. Doing things she'd not normally do. As in that almost having sex on "Orion"sort of thing....Better leave now, or this review'll turn into a novel.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 4020
Summary: In these small hours, she realized they might have run out of time. Weir angst over her choices in Common Ground. A shweir story by special request.
Published: April 03, 2008   Updated: April 03, 2008
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: These Twists and Turns of Fate

Wow! This is great. Love this story already.

*Adds to faves and waits patiently for the next update*

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you like it. I\'ll try to get the next chapter up as soon as I\'m able.

Past Featured StoryRating: PG
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 924
Summary: Elizabeth's sense of curiosity is always honed when they discover a new facet of Atlantis. (Also contains Atlantis/Elizabeth. Yes, I know.)
Published: April 22, 2008   Updated: April 22, 2008
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Warmth of Heaven

Such a wonderful story. Loved it how you connected the love story to the Ancient woman, Ayiana, found in SG1's "Frozen". I just love it when writers, such as yourself, manages to do that. Love how they'll start to make Atlantis a city again, with all that follows. Meaning families, with kids and all those things. (No matter what the people on Earth says, because they're in another galaxy, for cryin' out loud.)

Another chapter, or a sequel, would be much appreciated, but this is also more than enough.

Btw... I also love those fics, where either John or Elizabeth has a connection with Atlantis.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's nice to hear that you liked the story, and also *why* you liked the story.

Rating: PG
Genres: Angst, Baby!fic, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25
Completed: No
Word count: 25624
Summary: John comes to a realization that changes everything. (set after ‘The Long Goodbye’)
Other pairings: Teyla & Ronon; Sam & Jack
Published: September 12, 2008   Updated: January 03, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed
Date: September 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Part 8: Returning to Earth

I'm a little annoyed, because I believe that John would have stayed an talked, now that Elizabeth sought him out and that she could have been a little more forceful in getting an explanation out of him. Even if it means having her running after him and getting him to talk to her. I really hope you have that in the beginning of the next chapter... Her chasing after him as he leaves. If not, having a certain General O'Neill knocking some sense into him at one point. (Even is she has just realized why, he is acting like he do, she still has reason to be good old-fashioned angry with him. I hope that you'll have her yelling at him, because even if he is unable to really share his feelings, he, at least, should have been able to talk to her about it, even before coming to Earth.)

But that's just me of course. This is your fic and can write it as you please, because it is up to you and no other how the story goes.

Oh and can I say that I just love, that you involved Jack/Sam in this? They're my fave SG1 pairing after all.

Author's Response: Well, Elizabeth is too shocked by his behavior and John is too emotional to talk... don\'t worry, it\'ll all get a lot clearer in the next two chapters... But I appreciate your honesty.
\r\nGlad you love the Jack/Sam part... they are my fav SG1 pairing too :^)

Past Featured StoryRating: G
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 971
Summary: The doors to the balcony hissed open. Elizabeth turned her head slightly to see who it was and was not surprised to find John Sheppard walking towards her.
Published: December 10, 2008   Updated: December 10, 2008
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww... This was very sweet and yes, John can pick out a present.A very nice present indeed.

And trust Rodney to have that incredible bad timing, by calling and demanding attention, therefore interrupt a tender moment. But adore the kiss Elizabeth placed upon John's cheek before he went to see what Rodney wanted.

If you decide for a second chapter or a sequel, that I'd be very happy. If not, that's OK. It is your fic and your decision after all.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Drabble, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 805
Summary: John has scratches on his back and Ronans quarters are next door to Elizabeth's. In other words, John and Elizabeth are so BUSTED.
Published: April 06, 2009   Updated: April 06, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed
Date: April 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a very entertaining story. Had me smiling all the way through. Loved how they go so busted, by those scratches on John's back.

One thing I have to correct you at:
It is "Ronon" and not "Ronan." (Just thought you'd like to know.)

Rating: G
Genres: Episode Prologues & Epilogues
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1953
Summary: What would have happened at the end of Common Ground, if there had been time.
Published: May 12, 2009   Updated: May 12, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would have also like a closure in that episode. Meaning John coming back to Atlantis and being "reunited" with Elizabeth. It was very annoying, that the episode ended where it ended, because it lacked of a, somewhat, closure. If only by a balcony scene between John and Elizabeth, in whatever manner they (the writers), could have played it out. By a hug or just plain talking between J&E.

I'm a tad displeased with the writers in regards to the ending.

But nevertheless... *Story goes to faves*

Author's Response: Yeah, I was too, that episode was just asking for a balcony ending. Irresistable!

Rating: G
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1509
Summary: What did the rest of the team think of John's behaviour when Elizabeth was infected with nanites?
Major spoilers for The Real World and minor ones for the Seige.
Published: May 12, 2009   Updated: May 12, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, this was a wonderful story. And don't think it was bad, because it isn't. It's very good.

If you ever decide on writing a second chapter, then I'll gladly read it. Other than that: Love it.

Author's Response: Thanks, I didn't think of that but if I do, I'd love you to read it!

Rating: PG-13
Genres: General
Warnings: Violence
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed: Yes
Word count: 31903
Summary: John finds the one person he never thought he'd see again....
Set some time in S4 after Trio and Midway, based on the ending of Be All My Sins Remembered. Also contains Sam/Jack, Rodney/Jennifer and slight Daniel/Vala. Please read!
Published: May 26, 2009   Updated: September 26, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

No, not a boring chapter at all. I liked it a lot.

I have one thing though... In the first part, where Jack snaps out an "Oh for goodness sake!"... He would more likely have snapped out an "Oh fer cryin' out loud!" instead, because that's one of his trademark saying, especially when dealing with an exasperating situation like that. Just a FYI. But cool he got to go off-world (or off-city) and got to put his Ancient gene to good use again.

Now to see what happens, now that they're just under that replicator battle ship.

Author's Response: Thanks! Your review was really detailed and constructive and I'd prefer if you tell me what you really think, otherwise I just end up guessing! I think you're probabley right about Jack, one thing thats really hard about fanfiction is keeping the characteristaion and this is one of my first stories so it's hard trying to see what fits the characters. So thanks for telling me. If there's anything else you think is out of place tell me, I love hearing what you think!

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed: Yes
Word count: 7689
Summary: John and Elizabeth are back on Earth, Elizabeth is lecturing at Georgetown University when someone tries to kill her.
Published: May 30, 2009   Updated: June 28, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A very great start. Like it a lot already. Loved that you threw Jack in it too.

"Dr Lamm" is "Dr. Lam" by the way. Just a note, is all.

Author's Response: Thanks.. I'll edit as so as I get the chance :) I kinda figured someone had to be there if Elizabeth was missing and John was angsting.. Jack seemed the logical choice (and everyone loves him!)

Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Still a wonderful story and loved how John was comforting Elizabeth, when she realized that only four students came out alive.

Addendum to the last chapter's review (mine) and your response:
Since Georgetown is in DC and if Jack's at the Pentagon, it would make sense that he was there with John at a time like that.

Otherwise... Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: I'm in another country so I'm sorry if the geography is kinda wrong.. I try! Glad you are liking the fic :)

Rating: PG
Genres: Alternate Universe
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 936
Summary: I was born in the city of the Ancients 20 years ago.
Published: July 23, 2009   Updated: July 23, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Next Generation

This is a very lovely story.

But in the paragraph starting with "I’m a true Pegasus child., the word "taught" seems to be continuously mistaken with "thought" though. If it is the way it should be, then OK. But if it isn't, then just a note.

Author's Response: Thank you and you are absolutely right about the "taught/thought"... I just fixed it. Thank you for pointing me to that. You interested in a beta job by any chance? ;^)

Rating: PG
Genres: Fluff & Slush, General, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2035
Summary: People should really watch what they eat. Rodney learns the hard way. Elizabeth learns something new and John gets flustered.
Published: August 09, 2009   Updated: August 09, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Freaking hilarious. That mental picture I got, of Rodney dancing on the table and then being dragged down by Ronon, had me in giggles.

Loved the ending so much too.

Loved it so much. :D

Author's Response: Yay...I made you giggle - that was totally the response I wanted *grin*. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! x

Rating: G
Genres: Alternate Universe, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2257
Summary: Alternative version of Epiphany. John tries learning to meditate and learns something else instead. Sparky.
Published: August 27, 2009   Updated: August 27, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*Sighs* If I had had a say in, just how that episode should have ended, this was somewhat what I'd have in mind.

I have no words for how beautiful this fic are. So, I'm just leaving it at that.

Rating: PG
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3634
Summary: It's like being 14 again, except John’s pretty sure that even at age 14 he wasn’t this stupid.
Published: September 18, 2009   Updated: September 18, 2009
Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was such a fun read, with John being like a shy teenage boy, where his feelings towards Elizabeth was concerned. I loved how she figured it out and how she told him, that she returned those feelings. I loved that it all was resolved in such an adolescent way by scratching the initials into a table top...

I love it when you can get a good giggle reading a fic. *Adds it to faves.*

(Just one tiny thing though: You've spelled Ronon's name as Ronan, when it's the former that's the correct one. Just a FYI.)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had fun writing it. And thank you for pointing out my spelling mistake, I probably never would have picked that up.

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