Hannah554
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Real name: Hannah
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Reviews by Hannah554
Rating: R
Genres: Angst, Baby!fic, Mystery & Suspense, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: The morning after the night before...
Series: None
Chapters: 32
Completed: Yes
Word count: 201446
Summary: John and Elizabeth spend an intoxicated night together and wake up parents. Soon afterwards, the Replicators declare war on Earth and Atlantis. As everything falls apart around them, they try to build their life together. Spoilers for "The Return" and then descent in AU.
Published: October 04, 2006   Updated: September 06, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 26: reshaping

I really like this story and this was a great chapter.

Author's Response: thanks darling!

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 31: eternal

I really love this entire story and this chapter was just amazing. It was beautifully written and felt so realistic, it almost made me cry.

Fantastic Job!

Author's Response: thank you very much! you\'re very sweet and I\'m glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 32: city of light

This has been a fantastic story. I love how everything came together in the end and the scenes between John and Elizabeth were just adorable. Once again you almost made me cry with how beautifully written this is.

Fantastic Job!

Author's Response: Thank you sweetheart! I\'m so glad you liked it. *hugs*

Rating: M
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance, Smut & Porn
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed: Yes
Word count: 38014
Summary: Elizabeth needs to take a break from the UN and accepts a job as a housemaid. Little does she know that her new boss will turn her life upside down.

By PB

Published: March 23, 2007   Updated: December 23, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: Confessions

Loved this chapter and this whole story. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 24: Gone Again

Arghh Cliff hanger!

I hope John wll be okay and that he'll come home soon and they'll get back together and everyone will be happy... something tells me not though lol.

Great chapter, looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 25: Five Weeks Later

Yay, John's back!

Loved this entire chapter and I'm gonna be so sad to see this story end!

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

I totally loved this story, thanks for sharing it!

Rating: M
Genres: Crossover, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Missing Scene, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed: No
Word count: 64319
Summary: Everyone has connections to the past, and oftentimes those connections shape the path of the future. An extended and shippified, Sparky, novalization of INTRUDER. First comes JohnElizabeth UST, and then comes the fun that is JohnElizabeth RST.
Published: May 20, 2007   Updated: July 02, 2008
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved this chapter, especially John's thoughts. Good Job!

Author's Response: John\'s thoughts were, actually, sorta cribbed from something an old boyfriend said to me about being on a base. His callsign was as unimaginative as John\'s is on the show--his name was Papponski and everyone called him \'Pappy\'--and it drove him absolutely nuts.

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Another great chapter, I feel for Teyla, that science and time delays part had me confused as well lol. Loved the phone call between John and Liz and him making her hang up when she was driving. Can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: The science is probably complete BS; I passed Earth Science with a B average and Bio with a low C+, but never attempted anything beyond the basics in any other hard science. I just needed a reason for Teyla and Zelenka to dial in early since I felt like everything was getting a little disconnected from Atlantis. The John and Elizabeth hang-up thing was a fun piece to write. Usually she\'s the one openly worrying about him; I liked giving John a rhyme and reason to worry about Elizabeth and, beyond that, for him to let her know that he was worrying about her. Thanks for reviewing. Manic Penguin

Rating: R
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff & Slush, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Smut & Porn
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3114
Summary: Five times John tells Elizabeth she's beautiful. no spoilers.
Published: August 20, 2007   Updated: August 20, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Five Times

This was great, I think the fourth one was deifinitely my favourite.

Rating: G
Genres: Other/Misc
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed: Yes
Word count: 17588
Summary: Moments between John and Elizabeth.



Some will be episode related, some won't.
Published: August 22, 2007   Updated: June 22, 2008
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awwww, I love this!

Author's Response: Thanks. It\'s a little unusual...

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This was so cute and John's line about them having a field day with this was great, very him.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Adorable, loved how John responded to Elizabeth in his drugged up, incoherent state.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Elizabeth drunk and doing yoga, for some reason that really made me laugh. I can't wait for Elizabeth's reaction to this!

Author's Response: Well, I try to amuse. Sometimes.

Rating: PG
Genres: Crossover, Fluff & Slush
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1689
Summary: John gets his team and Elizabeth hooked on Battlestar Galactica. Very slight crossover and spoilers for Battlestar. Post-First Strike.
Published: September 07, 2007   Updated: September 07, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Watching the President

Great story!

I really love the John/Liz relationship in this fic. Great Job!

Rating: R
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Drugs
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No
Word count: 2431
Summary: When three members of the expedition, two of which they had thought they had lost forever, walk through the stargate from another reality, the team and John have to find them a way home.
Published: October 06, 2007   Updated: December 07, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Oddness

I like this idea, I really loved Ronon just walking in and shooting them all. Looking forward to more!

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama
Warnings: Abuse, Violence
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 1210
Summary: Ba'al comes to Antartica and steals away five of the future Atlantis expidition, for his own Atlantis expedition.
Published: October 15, 2007   Updated: October 15, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Kill them

I'm intruiged to see where you're going with this, hope there's more to come soon.

Rating: R
Genres: Fluff & Slush, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 997
Summary: How well do they really know each other?
Published: October 22, 2007   Updated: October 22, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Recon

I love John and Liz, great job!

Rating: PG
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1270
Summary: Imagine being attacked by an ancient device which is actually an air circulating fan. Can the Pegasus Galaxy get any weirder?
Published: November 10, 2007   Updated: November 10, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Fan of Doom

This was great, very funny and the subtle hints of sparky made me smile. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I\'m glad you enjoyed it!

Rating: PG
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 491
Summary: John and Elizabeth are back together on Earth.
Published: December 03, 2007   Updated: December 03, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this!

Rating: G
Genres: Missing Scene
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 383
Summary: Missing scene for "Allies". A different take on what John meant when he said that he was worried about his grandkids.
Published: December 08, 2007   Updated: December 08, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this take on John's line. Great Job!

Author's Response: Thank you! Have to credit the discussion in the Sparky thread for pointing out Elizabeth\'s look, thought. ;-)

Rating: G
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No
Word count: 703
Summary: Elizabeth collapses, the wraith are in atlantis, what will happen next. Will Elizabeth recover, Atlantis is in danger. Oh no
Published: December 09, 2007   Updated: December 13, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.

Rating: R
Genres: Action & Adventure, Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: Violence
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed: No
Word count: 7993
Summary: Alone and held captive on the Replicator home world, Elizabeth does all that she can to stay sane: play solitaire...and plan her escape.
Published: December 12, 2007   Updated: October 12, 2008
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One

Love this, hope you continue and as for canon, i think has a lot of tails to kiss right now.

Author's Response: Indeed! ;) Thanks so much! XD Continuations are in the works!

Rating: G
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 563
Summary: Missing scene from This Mortal Coil
Published: December 18, 2007   Updated: December 18, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This scene should so have been in the episode! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Rating: M
Genres: Angst, Drama, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Fluff & Slush, Hurt/Comfort, Missing Scene, Romance, Smut & Porn
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 5724
Summary: In which traumatic events and near-death experiences lead to sex. Spoilers for The Storm/The Eye, Siege III, Misbegotten, Progeny, TRW.
Published: December 22, 2007   Updated: December 22, 2007
Reviewer: Hannah554 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, I like the last one best.

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