Chaya Rules
Penname: Chaya Rules [Contact]
Real name: Ann
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Member Since: July 24, 2006
Website: http://www.encyclopedia-atlantica.com/chaya/index.html
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Have you ever done something you wish you hadn't, and realized you'd spend the rest of eternity paying for it?

Story of my life.

No, really.
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Reviews by Chaya Rules
Rating: PG
Genres: Alternate Universe, Fluff & Slush, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed: No
Word count: 19024
Summary: What if Elizabeth found out she was pregnant a few weeks after arriving on Atlantis?
Published: July 29, 2005   Updated: January 05, 2006
Reviewer: Chaya Rules Signed
Date: August 01, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: 4 Months- October

I really enjoy this concept (I hadn't actually run into any 'Elizabeth arrives in Atlantis pregnant fics before), but I think it might benefit from another pass from a different Beta. There is a rather high percentage of incorrect word usage, and you've consistantly mis-spelled Lt. Aiden Ford's first name incorrectly. This isn't meant as a personal attack, merely some advice that I don't think you've got the best mesh of beta as of the publication of this piece. I know I wouldn't write nearly as well as I do if I didn't have my beta.

Rating: PG
Genres: Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Fluff & Slush, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1156
Summary: She keeps staring at his mouth. TLG post-ep. Sequel to Hypothetically Speaking.
Published: February 18, 2006   Updated: February 18, 2006
Reviewer: Chaya Rules Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: N/A

I think this ranks as one of the best post-TLG fics I've seen. I love the playful nature, and the writing style really fits. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you for such kind words!! I had fun writing this fic, so I\'m really glad you liked it. :) Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: Chaya Rules Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: N/A

I think this ranks as one of the best post-TLG fics I've seen. I love the playful nature, and the writing style really fits. Nice job.

Rating: PG
Genres: Angst, Drama, Future Fic, Introspective, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 5531
Summary: Formatting Fixed! A visitor suddenly appears on Atlantis who has major implications for John and Elizabeth's future. No spoilers specifically, all applies. Takes place in the near future. John/Elizabeth with slight Teyla/Ronon mention.
Published: March 07, 2006   Updated: March 07, 2006
Reviewer: Chaya Rules Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Future Imperfect

Very nicely done. Sparing enough that it will flow well with canon as it evolves, yet little details that make all the difference. Very nice approach to what's often a bad cliche.

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