Center Starr
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Reviews by Center Starr
Past Featured StoryRating: PG
Genres: Fluff & Slush
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed: No
Word count: 23095
Summary: Relaxing moments on Atlantis come few and far between...
Published: June 08, 2005   Updated: April 29, 2006
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Persuasion

I can see why this series is featured! You have a great writing style, and it's full of engaging dialogue and character thought. Keep up the good writing!

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Flirtations

Awww... more cute banter--I love it!

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Temptation

Very sweet! *giggle* :)

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Asking For Trouble

Another awesome story. You have great talent for writing, and I love all the John/Elizabeth scenes.

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Recuperation

I like the way you wrote this like missing scenes after Conversion. Great chapter!

Rating: G
Genres: Fluff & Slush
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 275
Summary: She likes early evenings the best.
Published: June 19, 2005   Updated: June 19, 2005
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Early Evenings 1/1

Very cute!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Rating: G
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 855
Summary: The storm has passed, and John Sheppard must pick up the pieces.
Published: June 20, 2005   Updated: June 20, 2005
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Okay

This is an awesome portrayal of an easy friendship that could so easily become something more. I like it a lot, especially because it's clean and it's cute interaction. Good job!

Rating: G
Genres: Missing Scene, Romance, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 974
Summary: Elizabeth Weir contemplates life after Sheppard is rescued by the Daedelus. Her feelings for Sheppard are straying beyond friendship. Spoiler from the Seige, Part 3.
Published: July 22, 2005   Updated: July 22, 2005
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Always wanted to know what thoughts went through their minds at that moment... you should write one from John's POV. Very cute, good writing!

Rating: G
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed: No
Word count: 3521
Summary: My version of what may happen between John and Elizabeth after The Lost Boys.
Published: October 31, 2005   Updated: October 31, 2005
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter1

Great! I like the way you've tied conflict in with their friendship/relationship. I can't wait to read the next!

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter2

Very cute! :-)

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter2

Very cute! :-)

Rating: G
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drabble, Introspective, Romance, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 212
Summary: "You'll never grow old for me." 1x13 drabble.
Published: November 15, 2005   Updated: November 15, 2005
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: 1

Very sweet, and kinda sad and thoughtful too. I liked it a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Rating: G
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 357
Summary: Elizabeth thinks about the men in her lives and what they think of her.
Published: November 23, 2005   Updated: November 23, 2005
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Party

Very cute! I loved the quote! John calls her beautiful... he's perfect 4 Liz! :-)

Author's Response: yeah he is isn\'t he! this was my first story that i posted so i\'m excited to get such nice reviews from it!

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Party

Very cute! I loved the quote! John calls her beautiful... he's perfect 4 Liz! :-)

Rating: G
Genres: Fluff & Slush
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2725
Summary: Santa's unlikely helpers work to John and Elizabeth's benefit.
Published: December 18, 2005   Updated: December 18, 2005
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

This story was awesome! write another :)

Rating: G
Genres: Fluff & Slush
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed: Yes
Word count: 3588
Summary: Elizabeth doesn't fail to notice the people pairing off. Will she ever date?
Published: January 02, 2006   Updated: January 02, 2006
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstar
Date: June 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Pairing Off

Very cute idea, dating in Atlantis! On the last sentence: I think you mean "smile" instead of "smiled". I'm excited to read the rest of the series. :-)

Author's Response: thanks i had a lot of fun writing those stories. i think i\'m about done though.

Rating: G
Genres: Fluff & Slush, Romance, Other/Misc
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 679
Summary: Little conversation between John and Elizabeth about the unexpected weather conditions and his ability to predict it. Shepweir friendship, with a little flirting.
Published: January 16, 2006   Updated: January 16, 2006
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Snow

Cute idea! A snowball fight on Atlantis... :-) Write another chapter!

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Snow

Cute idea! A snowball fight on Atlantis... :-) Write another chapter!

Rating: G
Genres: Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Fluff & Slush
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1062
Summary: Set after 'Instinct' and written before I knew anything about 'Conversion'
Published: February 11, 2006   Updated: February 11, 2006
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Cute! I love the ending

Rating: G
Genres: Angst, Episode Prologues & Epilogues, Hurt/Comfort, Missing Scene
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2612
Summary: sheppard tries to cheer Elizabeth up. Spoilers for Critical Mass.
Published: February 11, 2006   Updated: February 11, 2006
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Sheppard's Gift

Wonderful! I really like it. It's so sweet and it's clean, too. I think it's the perfect scene for John/Elizabeth; great idea and great job writing it.

Author's Response: thanks very much. i\'m only 16 so i prefer clean fics!!!

Rating: G
Genres: Fluff & Slush, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 356
Summary: Elizabeth has been injured,and John won't leave her.
Published: February 16, 2006   Updated: February 16, 2006
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Elizabeth sleeps.

Very cute... but write the next scene!

Rating: G
Genres: Fluff & Slush, General, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed: No
Word count: 27066
Summary: Could a meeting in a park bring a new member to the expedition?
Published: February 27, 2006   Updated: June 22, 2008
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Meeting in a park

Definitely continue! I loved watching John and Elizabeth interact around Sedge; has a lot of potential. Great writing!

Author's Response: I\'m continuing this fic. I just hadn\'t had time to update my website thus my fics here. Thank you!!

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: 4. Making New Friends

Very cute! Love all the banter, and the references to the rest of the base (McKay's cat, ha ha :). I love Sedge's adventures, keep writing more!

Author's Response: Thanks! And don\'t worry! More is coming!

Rating: G
Genres: Drabble, Fluff & Slush, Future Fic, Romance, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 366
Summary: Continuing from "Morning"... Since John and Elizabeth's wedding was secret, their mementos aren't exactly average...
Published: March 15, 2006   Updated: March 15, 2006
Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Hidden (1/1)

Very AWEsome. What a cute idea about the rings! Keep writing!

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Hidden (1/1)

Very AWEsome. What a cute idea about the rings! Keep writing!

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