cloe
Penname: cloe [Contact]
Real name: cloe
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Member Since: December 23, 2005
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I'm from hungary, I don't really speak English, but I like writing and I trury think that John and Liz are desingned for each other, but I don't like the idea that John gets Elizabeth without any complications. I like to see real men fights! :)
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Reviews by cloe
Rating: R
Genres: Angst, Fluff & Slush, Future Fic, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed: Yes
Word count: 27311
Summary: He went to bed in his own room alone, he woke up with a wife, three kids… and a screwed up future.
Published: April 21, 2006   Updated: June 17, 2006
Reviewer: cloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Future Mistakes Makes For Crappy Lives

I just loved that you countinoued the story, it's really-really good! So I hope you'll update soon!

Rating: M
Genres: General, Action & Adventure, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery & Suspense, Other/Misc
Warnings: Character Death, Rape/Non-Consensual, Violence
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed: No
Word count: 4171
Summary: After the ordeal with Colonel Everett, Elizabeth could not help but notice a sudden change with John Sheppard. WARNING: Contains character death (but not for long), I am unsure on what to rate it so it is going to be M and even though a relationship is not immediate- the beginning and end does have relationships.
Published: April 29, 2006   Updated: July 19, 2006
Reviewer: cloe Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue part 1

nice story opener! continoue great work! i just can't wait till next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Next chapter is coming up!

Reviewer: cloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue part 1

It's getting more and more interesting! Continoue great work!

Author's Response: I am typing up the next chapter now so just sit still for a while.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: General, Fluff & Slush, Humor, Romance, Other/Misc
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed: No
Word count: 1706
Summary: Summary: Everyone knows who Elizabeth Weir is, but do they know what she writes in her love diary? Does her crush even know? To find out start reading Elizabeth’s Love Diary! A/N- I made up a few details in the first chapter in the information part, and I have added an O/C-Melissa.
Published: May 02, 2006   Updated: May 13, 2006
Reviewer: cloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: My love diary-SQUEAL!

i just loved this fic!!! it's not one of the usual stories, and t's funny! since i just love reading all sorts of diaries, i'm begging you to continoue soon! :)

Author's Response: Already written next chapter! Thanks, When I saw in search no one else had thought of this I decided to do this.

Rating: PG-13
Genres: General, Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed: Yes
Word count: 6690
Summary: “I thought we agreed to stop doing this,” Elizabeth reminded. “Yeah, we did didn’t we?” John softly stated. A nearby nurse eavesdrops on their conversation with confusion. Who is the bigger fool?
Published: May 12, 2006   Updated: May 12, 2006
Reviewer: cloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three

V. v. g. story! Just loved the examination part! Keep up good work and write more often! :)

Author's Response: Wahoo!!! I'm jumping for joy that you enjoyed the story! I was extremely worried that readers wouldn't like it, because it does involve an OC friendship with Sheppard! I feared I would get flames for that, but it turns out that many readers enjoyed it! So, Yea!!! Anyhoo, thanks a bundle for the review! I loved writing the examination scenes, and I'm very glad you enjoyed reading them! Gotta have that Sheppard whumpage, Yummy!!! Oh, and I'm blushing with pride that you want me to write more! I do plan on it, so be on the lookout for more!!! Big hugs and LOL!!!

Rating: G
Genres: Drabble, Humor, Vignettes
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: No
Word count: 477
Summary: John has a song for Elizabeth...
Published: May 27, 2006   Updated: May 27, 2006
Reviewer: cloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Folsom Prison Blues (1/1)

really-really good! love the idea of john singing country! countinoue great work! :)

Author's Response: I know, me too. Country music RULES and John singing it? mmmm. *melts*

Rating: PG
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 2207
Summary: Time doesn't care about hope. A moment gone by will never come again.
Published: November 03, 2006   Updated: November 03, 2006
Reviewer: cloe Signed
Date: November 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Time

I loved how you can word people feelings. I think a lot of us had at least some of them, but could never put them into words. Congratulations!

Rating: PG-13
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Abuse, Torture, Violence
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed: No
Word count: 12021
Summary: Elizabeth goes off-world; the mission goes awry; the team gets angsty. Is it EVER good when Elizabeth goes off-world? Chapter 8 up!
Published: December 14, 2006   Updated: July 02, 2007
Reviewer: cloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Three Weeks Earlier

Okey, loved the whole luau thing with coconuts, athosian children coloring and rondney's helping...
V. funny, needs some more chapters, and by the way, your username is brilliant! So, keep on going!;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love the kids coloring; it just seemed like something that I\'d do as a kid. I like my username too!

Rating: G
Genres: Drabble, Fluff & Slush, Future Fic, General
Warnings: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 411
Summary: Christmas in Atlantis.
Published: December 15, 2006   Updated: December 15, 2006
Reviewer: cloe Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: And On The Sixth Day

Okey, this is a nice little story. Don't listen to them, it's lovely the way it is!

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