Reviews For Real Emotion
Reviewer: shannyfish Signed
Date: March 23, 2007 - 04:53 am
Title: Chapter 1
When you write a story using a song...it really should be weaved into a story. The song should also be cited with its composer or artist. And it would be nice if it were a STORY and not just some lines with lyrics slapped into it.
It's nice to find songs that work perfectly for things, but you need to write the story and work it in...
Reviewer: kiky Signed
Date: March 22, 2007 - 09:02 pm
Title: Chapter 1
this is such a good story.....just to let you know, i think you mix both summaries of this story and the either one "my only love"....aka that story is good too....