Reviews For She Smiles
Reviewer: solemn_eyed Signed Date: July 13, 2007 - 02:36 pm Title: She Smiles

Very good story! It is well written and the idea is interesting. I suspected a couple of things, like Elizabeth being taken over by an alien or under some alien drug or the likes, but an AU Elizabeth was a surprise :-)
But the ending is very evil *pouts*
Maybe you could do a companion-piece that shows us how our poor Elizabeth fares in the Alternate Reality.

Author's Response: Yay! As for the evil endingness, I tend to do that a lot for angsty circumstances (I get random angsty periods where I'm all "MUST...WRITE...ANGST...NOW!!!". Oh well). Companion-piece? Hmm...*ponders*

Reviewer: izzles Signed Date: April 23, 2007 - 08:19 pm Title: She Smiles

Love the style to this story, and the idea is great.
Laughed when I read your user info page by the way, "forever Satuday"

Author's Response: Heh...well, I try to pretend. Lalalala...*hands over ears* Sunday? What Sunday? The week's only six days long. As for the story, thanks!

Reviewer: Oparu Signed Date: March 23, 2007 - 08:53 am Title: She Smiles

1st person is hard to do, but you pulled it off well. Is there more to this?

There should be. ;)

Author's Response: No, I don't think there will be unless the plot bunnies bite again. Thanks!

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: March 13, 2007 - 09:41 pm Title: She Smiles

I knew it!

I figured it was an AU Elizabeth.

Loved the little story. Great job for just writing and posting.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, it's kind of obvious when she all gun-happy and beating up Ronon and Teyla. But it was fun to write.

Reviewer: brains103 Signed Date: March 12, 2007 - 09:37 pm Title: She Smiles

good!! I was like, what on earth is happening??? There's no way she could beat Ronon! :)

Author's Response: Heh, we all know Lizzie could beat Ronon to the GROUND. Or not. Thanks!

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