Reviews For Clarity
Reviewer: krisrussel Signed Date: January 08, 2009 - 12:01 am Title: Clarity

I like this one very much... especially the way you focus on the change in Elizabeth and John's reaction to it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: ele_belly Signed Date: November 09, 2008 - 11:46 pm Title: Clarity

Awww, that's cute =] 5 stars!

Author's Response: Why thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: izzles Signed Date: April 30, 2007 - 07:25 pm Title: Clarity

I like this missing scene - the fact that you address the change in Elizabeth from being very anti-guns but now realising how they need them for their mission especially.
And John wanting to protect her *grins* And they hug, and practically admit how much they care about the other ^_^

Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much! I agree with all of your comments! lol.

Reviewer: Oparu Signed Date: February 20, 2007 - 05:06 am Title: Clarity

I like the idea of this. How they're trying to be honest with each other and failing...

I think you should work on the spacing, it would be easier to read if you put an extra
space between dialogue.

And what about you? She challenged.

Ive been on countless missions. Ive faced every kind of trouble. You know I can handle this.

Oh, and I cant? She asked.


Like this.

Reviewer: Oparu Signed Date: February 20, 2007 - 05:05 am Title: Clarity

I like the idea of this. How they're trying to be honest with each other and failing...

I think you should work on the spacing, it would be easier to read if you put an extra
space between dialogue.

And what about you? She challenged.

Ive been on countless missions. Ive faced every kind of trouble. You know I can handle this.

Oh, and I cant? She asked.


Like this.

Author's Response: Ah, yes, I should've thought of that! *facepalm* lol. I'm gonna do that next time! "I like the idea of this. How they're trying to be honest with each other and failing..." I love your review!

Reviewer: brains103 Signed Date: February 17, 2007 - 01:42 am Title: Clarity

very sweet! i love when he gets protective of her. although if you've seen First Strike, Sheppard doesn't stand up too much for Elizabeth when Ellis says that Sheppard should be in charge. i didn't like that but.

Author's Response: I agree! I found it dumb that Shep didn't jump at the chance to defend her honor agian! *cries* Thanks for the review! And hopefully we'll get more scenes in season 4...*crosses fingers for some *really* good scenes*

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