Cute. I love the last sentence (of course, lol).
Aww I love the ending sentence, so cute! (:
aww that's cute. :)
write moree .. :D
I really like this. It's sweet and cute, I really don't see it being OOC at all.
The last line was perfect and totally squee-worthy *g*
Author's Response: Nice to know you liked! ^^
Ha! I like it--and I've often wondered how old he actually is, just because of the Epiphany thing, but maybe it all balances out because of the Wraith-giving-life-back thing. I'm not very eloquent today. It's not really out of character, I thought. I thought it was quite in character, actually. I liked it--is it going to be continued? It'd be fine as a one-shot, but it might be kind of nice to have a second chapter where he asks her.
Author's Response: It's been so long since I've written E/J fics, that I really just could not judge if it is in character or not. But it's nice to hear that I wasn't being completly in the wrong. :D I hadn't initially planned a sequal, but now that you mentioned it, I'm really starting to feel a muse coming. Perhaps something from Elizabeth's POV? :D