I read this far in March, and was absolutely frantic for more... SO SO GLAD THAT I CAME BACK! On to the next chapter... I'm hooked!
I absolutely loved this story and was sorry to see it end! One of my all time favorites! :)
update update!! i love this story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm not sure if the "update update" is pleading for more of this fic though. That was the epilogue, so this story is finished. Glad you loved!
Poor John! So much going on in this chapter...I loe heroic Elizabeth giving her life for others, and how well you slipped in Janet's sacrifice.
John seems so empty without Elizabeth, and I love how you build his terror when he can't find her. The "It's a wonderful life" aspect is subtle and brilliant, even though John doesn't seem to be a family man in the beginning, by the end it makes sense that it's what he wants.
Now I have to read it again...
Wow. I never thought you could get that much suspense and suprise into one chapter! I loved it! Has John finally woken up from the coma after Koyla?! Maybe he'll be there for Elizabeth when the storm comes this time!
Yay! Johns finally got *some* sense into his head! Hope he doesn't get hurt on the hunt!
wow I wasn't expecting that! Is Lucius lying?
Awww. It takes more than that, Mr. Sheppard, to make me weak in the knees now
I loved that! I hope he remembers. Well off the read the next chapter!
great chapter! im kinda confused though, is he waking up in normal time and the right universe?
OMG! I love this. You've completely shocked me with this chapter...
I love this story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
great next chapter! nice emotions!
Another amazing job! Great beginning, I know there has to be more!
I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next!
woah, well that is one interesting storyline! I really love it? Are you going to write more? Please? *puppydogeyes* :) Great work!