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Reviewer: shannyfish Signed Date: January 21, 2007 - 06:56 am Title: Off World

you could use a beta reader. there are some errors in formatting and punctuation. i would also suggest one to go over your characterizations...there was a lot that i found that seemed off. i'd also work on adding detail. even with a good plotline, lack of details can just make it all a boring read.

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