great fic :X
Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for the review!
this was brilliant - love sick John. and was almost doubled over laughing at some of the lines:
something akin to what a dying, asthmatic cat might squeak out absolute favourite!
and the sparkyness was lovely and completely adorable.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear it made you laugh --that was exactly what I was hoping for :) As for the Sparky, well it's just so hard to NOT make it cute with those two! Thanks so much for your review!
"It ended up sounding something akin to what a dying, asthmatic cat might squeak out, but the effort was there."
My favorite line. Great little fic. You've brightened my morning. Thanks for writing Sheppard/Weir.
Author's Response: Sparky is the only thing I CAN write :D And that particular line was one of my few strokes of genius when I was writing it..LOL. I'm honoured to have brightened your morning and thanks so much for your feedback!
This is so good! I love it!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks for reviewing!
I really liked this story. It's not often that you see Sheppard's macho-ness take a beating!! Will Sheppard be getting his ow back???
Author's Response: John needs a little beating now and then, to remind him he's not the only supreme being in Atlantis ;) As for getting his own back, if a good idea strikes, then I will try to write about it, but as of now, no ideas yet. Thanks so much for the feedback!
awww...very sweet. I like it. Elizabeth and Teyla ganging up is quite fun.
Author's Response: I thought it would be fun to have two of the important women of Atlantis turning on him :) Thanks so much for your review!