Reviewer: shepweir always Signed Date: January 25, 2010 - 04:36 am Title: And On The Sixth Day

Very cute and love that you named the baby after Rodney. Can their be a sequel with a baby Becket Sheppard?

Reviewer: krisrussel Signed Date: April 25, 2008 - 03:35 pm Title: And On The Sixth Day

aaaaah..... so sweet :^D
Everytime I feel down, I'll read this story and feel a whole lot better :^)

Reviewer: cloe Signed Date: December 24, 2006 - 08:34 pm Title: And On The Sixth Day

Okey, this is a nice little story. Don't listen to them, it's lovely the way it is!

Reviewer: Penny Signed Date: December 20, 2006 - 09:42 am Title: And On The Sixth Day

Ohh...great. I haven't got this whole "Christmas Feeling" yet, but reading fics like yours helps me getting there...thanks.

Not too many mistakes as far as I can tell, but I'm not a native speaker ;)

Penny

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: December 16, 2006 - 08:31 am Title: And On The Sixth Day

Absolutely adorable! I loved it!

Reviewer: Oparu Signed Date: December 15, 2006 - 04:26 pm Title: And On The Sixth Day

This would be interesting if you expand it. What did she get John? Did anyone else get anything fun? Some of the ideas seem like they could go somewhere, but I feel like I'm reading the back of a book in like somewhere instead of a story.

Reviewer: atlantis child Signed Date: December 15, 2006 - 04:23 pm Title: And On The Sixth Day

yes...this is...uh...interesting... But it seems like more of a list than a story... I'd suggest that you take these six paragraphs and make them each into at least a chapter that's at least a page or two... Cuz right now it's like, what is this? Definately not a story. Possibly a beta could help you develop it? Also, you'll want to get your SGA right, because in The Real World we find out that Elizabeth's mother is her only living parent.

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