Very cute and love that you named the baby after Rodney. Can their be a sequel with a baby Becket Sheppard?
aaaaah..... so sweet :^D
Everytime I feel down, I'll read this story and feel a whole lot better :^)
Okey, this is a nice little story. Don't listen to them, it's lovely the way it is!
Ohh...great. I haven't got this whole "Christmas Feeling" yet, but reading fics like yours helps me getting there...thanks.
Not too many mistakes as far as I can tell, but I'm not a native speaker ;)
Absolutely adorable! I loved it!
This would be interesting if you expand it. What did she get John? Did anyone else get anything fun? Some of the ideas seem like they could go somewhere, but I feel like I'm reading the back of a book in like somewhere instead of a story.
yes...this is...uh...interesting... But it seems like more of a list than a story... I'd suggest that you take these six paragraphs and make them each into at least a chapter that's at least a page or two... Cuz right now it's like, what is this? Definately not a story. Possibly a beta could help you develop it? Also, you'll want to get your SGA right, because in The Real World we find out that Elizabeth's mother is her only living parent.