what a brill story, as i said before.
and no thanks are necessary, just keep writing!
Author's Response: thanks are necessary! and anytime u need a beta etc. or someone to look over ur stuff, im right there! :)
Great chapter.
Oh no, that wont be an issue; I find the idea of sex for money morally repugnant.
Good one Lizzie put him in his place!!! I guess John is gonna have to stop this playboy buissness soon hey.
Another great chapter! Good going :)
Author's Response: lol, i stole that line from the movie. i thought it was clever. he wont be stopping anytime soon, but maybe he will consider it later when he starts to fall for a certain woman ;)
ooh write more soon, i'm very interested
Author's Response: thanks, im half way thru writing chapter 3, so it should be up in the next few days.
This is a very cute little story. I like how nervous Elizabeth is and how stunning John is.
Author's Response: thanks, we dont get many nervous lizzie's in fanfiction, probably 'cos shes such a strong woman. but this AU so its ok for her to be nervous ;) also johns always stunning :)
I'm enjoying this so far and cant wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: thank you, the next chapter is coming soon!