I really enjoyed this story, I haven't seen this episode but now I will have to check in out. I think you did a great job with all the characters and I like how you let Elizabeth admit to John that he matters more. Because when you love someone you can't help but feel a little more worried about them.
is wither supposed to be either??
I like it. Seems to be missing from the episode, after something as stressful as that needs a little sparky moment after. I love how he's the important one and she can't deny it. Very nicely done.
cute! *likes it*