That breakdown scene was so powerful and authenic to Elizabeth
awwww....that's such a good breakdown scene...i'm surprised we haven't seen a good 'buckle from stress scene' especially after "Common Ground"! Nicely done! You know you could just probe through the list of beta-readers... I'd volunteer, but I may be a bit slow to harass because of school and work ;)
very nice! Liked it a lot!
If you want me to I'm good at harrassing people and being generally annoying, just ask the people on my LJ!! I can help you out if I haven't got too much on my plate over the next few weeks