Reviews For Salvation
Reviewer: Suzaku Signed Date: August 30, 2008 - 06:09 am Title: The Ultimate Sacrifice

That was so sad! I cryed so hard!

Reviewer: Oparu Signed Date: October 30, 2006 - 10:41 am Title: The Ultimate Sacrifice

Wow...ouch and kleenexes galore. Beautifully written, reminds me of the stories of elderly men killing their ailing wives out of love, but sadder because they're both so young.

John seems more dead than Elizabeth and I think that's the saddest, most gut-wrechingly wonderful part.

Reviewer: Steph7085 Signed Date: October 26, 2006 - 11:17 pm Title: It's Okay...

OMG...I can't believe whats happening. I really hope Elizabeth gets through this, as well as John. Please update soon, i need to know what happens!

Reviewer: Oparu Signed Date: October 26, 2006 - 01:57 pm Title: It's Okay...

Eep! Poor Elizabeth. Poor John. Almost feel worse for John. Dealing with pain is one thing, watching someone you care about is something else. I don't have enough fingernails for this story.

Reviewer: elora Signed Date: September 22, 2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Anger

Oh wow i love this story. You're not gonna actually kill anyone are you???

Author's Response: ya know, I have yet to decide yet...I always put that in cases when it could go either way... But when I write I sorta don't plan it completely out... So, I'm not even completely sure what's going to go on!

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: September 20, 2006 - 04:31 am Title: Anger

OH, evil Koyla! Don't let anything happen to Elizabeth!...okay, well nothing *that* bad anyway. John's got to get them out of there!

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: September 11, 2006 - 10:06 pm Title: Dark Times

*gasps* Uh oh! No, John, don't give him the code! Oh, poor Elizabeth! Since this is definitely 'hurt', will we get to see some 'comfort' soon?
Cause this story can fit into the hurt/comfort category.

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: September 04, 2006 - 01:08 am Title: Tactics

OMG! I'm so nervous! This was a great chapter! I can't wait for you to update this, please make it soon!

Reviewer: atlantisfan Signed Date: September 03, 2006 - 10:41 am Title: Tactics

aagghh, he'll regret hitting Elizabeth like that!!!

Reviewer: Anjirika Signed Date: August 31, 2006 - 04:54 am Title: Five Minutes

Ooo! Good story so far- love when Kolya shows up. Update soon, kay?

Author's Response: thank you for the review and enthusiasm. I have the next chapter all written out, but with homework to work on, it seems like I won't have time to type things for a couple days...unless free time just pops up.

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: August 27, 2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Five Minutes

Oh no! Great chapter. I'm waiting for more!

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: August 27, 2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Five Minutes

Oh no! Great chapter. I'm waiting for more!

Reviewer: Alia Signed Date: August 27, 2006 - 04:42 pm Title: Five Minutes

Loving the story and looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Bridget Signed Date: August 27, 2006 - 05:53 am Title: Five Minutes

im really getting into this story! update soon plz! :)

Reviewer: Trialia Signed Date: August 26, 2006 - 03:24 pm Title: Never An Easy Mission

You should change your title, there's already a big story in this fandom called Salvation.

Author's Response: I might, thank you for the suggestion, I saw that after I had already posted this, but the title works so perfectly for the storyline that for the moment it's going to remain with this title

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: August 26, 2006 - 03:19 pm Title: Never An Easy Mission

Woah! Great story idea. I think this is a awesome begining. I hope you continue this soon!

Author's Response: thanks! hopefully I'll be able to get at least a good chunk done before school starts here in a couple days...

Reviewer: Bridget Signed Date: August 26, 2006 - 09:03 am Title: Never An Easy Mission

oh cool story! update soon plz!

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