Reviewer: teyla_emmagan Signed Date: August 27, 2006 - 10:06 pm Title: What I was going to say was....

That was so cute! I like it how she asked him again.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and thought that it was cute. And thank you for reviewin. A writer likes to know that her work is being read and most importantly enjoyed.

Reviewer: atlantis child Signed Date: August 25, 2006 - 07:13 am Title: What I was going to say was....

the end is all italized ~_^ it needs to be reformatted because you can't see where the clip from the episode ends. it's a nice little idea, but I don't think Elizabeth would be so stuck on something like that...John's life was at risk so many times in the first season let alone since then...and I doubt John would recall that date immediately with that mission.

Author's Response: Thanks for the formatting notice ~_^. As to Elizabeth being stuck on that moment- well- maybe not- but I have been stuck on that moment since it aired. I would love to know what John was going to say- so I made this little drabble up. And as to John recalling that date- well I figure that after that one episode later on in season 1 where he tells Carson not to mention the bug ever again (can't remember what thats called) I figure he would. After all, that was one of the more, horrible situations that he found himself in.

Author's Response: Oh- and thank you for the comments. A writer always likes to know that her work is being read, and if a reader has something to point out- that is great. So thank you Atlantis Child.

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