Very nice scene... wish this would have been in the show... really shows the deep friendship and trust between them.
very cute little piece! I love the banter!
Author's Response: I'm glad!
I really liked that! It's great how you put the flashbacks into the conversation. And then Elizabeth telling John about Simon! Aww... The characters where also just like in the show. Excellent work! Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that it would be important for Elizabeth to tell John about Simon- I mean we saw her flashbacks of what happened in Intruder- but we never saw her tell him- I thought that she should have. Thank you for reviewing and saying that the characters were how they are in the show. That means a lot- and I'm glad you liked it! ^_^ ^i^
Nice fic--and great touch with the flashbacks, too.
Either I'm still obsessed/utterly traumatized by Voyager's ending or there's a Voyager reference in this story! I'll cry if John/Elizabeth end up like Kathryn/Chakotay.
Luckily, this story gives me hope that maybe there will be a semi-silver lining on J/E's ship cloud.
Author's Response: Yeah, there was a Voyager reference in there- I totally equate Elizabeth to Kathryn, John to Chakotay and Simon to Mark, Kathryn's fiancee on Earth. I too will cry if John and Elizabeth end up like Kathryn and Chakotay- but with the way things are going thus far- I have hope- besides Elizabeth is already a civilian- so no real issues...right? ^_^ Anyways, thank you for reviewing!