Very well done especially considering you haven't seen the episode. I loved the Real World...so much Sparky. I wish the stupid ptb could read fanfics like yours because you completely brought to life the secret behind SGA's magic Elizabeth & John.
I like it... it's very touching... and even though it's only based on the preview, it ties in perfectly with the episode.
Really short...i would have loved to see this longer and more indepth of John for the whole five hours...but nicely done.
Author's Response: I know its short, but at the time that this was written, I had no idea how long Elizabeth was sick. It was based just off that one line in the preview. But thank you for reviewing and I'm glad that you thought that it was nicely done.