*tee hee* loved that little interaction at the end- it was such a John-Elizabeth conversation! This is an intruiging story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing their conversations! Except now I seem to keep distracting them from talking with...other things. Eek...I'm spoiling my OWN story!
Nice! Especially liked Elizabeth surprising John in the end!
EHEHEHEHEHEHE i love the ending lines! SO GREAT!!! heehhehehe *sighs* The Long Goodbye was wonderful! I love how you tie it in