Oh- smart Elizabeth- trusting the Genii....^_^ Good story so far, looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, Elizabeth can be too trusting. Really, though, the Genii are just a plot device here!
i like the chapter! it's great! i love how elizabeth is like embarassed at who the information came from! very nicely done
You really cathed the personalities of the main characters! So, Chapter 2 is great as well, carry on, because I just can't wait to see what will happen!
Cool, another chapter already!
Ooooh, nice set up. The Genii was a good touch.
Looking forward to more!