that was excellent, i cant wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: To all who have responded....thank you so much for reading. I have finished another chapter, which my beta reader has currently. I won't abandon this story! :) Thanks for sticking around.
OMG! I love this story! It's great! I can't wait until you update.
Lovely. Still enjoying this story.
good job, I really like the part where John was at a loss for words. it was very well written. I can't wait to see what happens next.
awww very cute addition...nicely done