Reviews For Crossing the Line
Reviewer: elora Signed Date: October 18, 2006 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

Sheppard shot Mckay!!?!? When? What episode!?!? OMG!

Author's Response: lol yeah its in a season 3 episode. Phantoms i think...

Reviewer: john_and_lizzie Signed Date: October 08, 2006 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

another great chapter! and totally in character!

Reviewer: alianna Signed Date: October 07, 2006 - 03:00 am Title: Chapter 4

“Wouldn’t be the first time;remember when you shot me…”
very nice (lol) that was perfect McKay. Nice chapter!

Author's Response: hehe yay! i was scared about writing McKay, 'cos i wasnt sure if i'd be able to do him justice :)

Reviewer: Keegan Signed Date: July 30, 2006 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 3

Uh oh! How can it not be our Elizabeth?!

What's gonna happen?!

Author's Response: hehe, ul have to read on and see...

Reviewer: Angie Signed Date: July 22, 2006 - 09:49 am Title: Chapter 2

whoa! that is just so sweet and exciting at the same time! I hope you'll update soon again. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: thank you very much!

Reviewer: Eighth_Chevron Signed Date: July 10, 2006 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great story so far! Please update soon!!

Author's Response: its coming, i promise! thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: alianna Signed Date: June 25, 2006 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

this story sounds great!! Would love it if you would write more.

Author's Response: cool thanks another chapter is coming

Author's Response: cool thanks another chapter is coming

Reviewer: john_and_lizzie Signed Date: June 12, 2006 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

hey ness! thanks for coming up with such a cool story!

Author's Response: no probs, i'll talk to ya soon :)

Reviewer: Center Starr Signed Date: June 12, 2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter; write more! I love the twist at the end, with Caldwell. :-)

Author's Response: ok great! I'm new to this fanfiction and am busy writing the second chapter so it'll be up either tommorow or thursday. thanks for reviewing :)

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