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Reviewer: shepweir always Signed Date: February 15, 2010 - 06:45 am Title: chapter 1

Beautiful way to express Sparky love.
I felt John's pain and joy in every scene.
And the last line was priceless.

Reviewer: Bil Signed Date: November 26, 2009 - 05:37 am Title: chapter 1

Really nice story. I love this version of what John was thinking through the episodes, I think you did a great job of capturing his character. I particularly liked the line "Just before the Daedalus beams him aboard, he regrets not kissing her" but my favourite line is the beautiful "After all this time he still hasn't learnt how anyone could say no to her." That's just wonderful.

Thank you for the lovely fic.

Reviewer: Steph7085 Signed Date: December 01, 2008 - 11:10 pm Title: chapter 1

Nicely done. It reflects the episodes well, and John as well. They've always had a special connection from the beginning and you've captured it perfectly from John's POV.

Reviewer: Tennii xx Signed Date: November 07, 2008 - 11:33 pm Title: chapter 1

lovely story :) im liking your stuff .. :D

Reviewer: elora Signed Date: September 02, 2006 - 02:25 pm Title: chapter 1

Wow, way to summarise!!! I think you've proven that it's all Shep/weir and no sheyla (yuck) is there goind to be a sequel?

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