so sweet! :)
He is just so cute that I could see how she could say she hates him but in reality she loves him. Sad no sequel. I would have enjoyed reading one.
Awww! What no sequel? Hee hee. I love how you just put it out there..... I love this piece. I love it! *speechless.
Very cute :-)
it was a fantastic story can't whait to read more...
very lovely story! i like how you use places and your timeframe to make the story move in the short amount of space you used! beautifully done!
Great story! I really loved it. When I saw "the hive" I thought it would have been much more interesting if they had come a bit later. And now I found your story. Thanks for writing it! Itīs what I would have like to see.
This was a very good story. Can't wait to read another one :-)
just wanted to say how much i liked this one. I'd hate him too (lol)
uhh, I really like this one! :) The idea is great and I like the way you described everything. I just love angst btw. lol And the "I still hate you" line! How cute is that! Good job.
Suggestion: maybe you could "meld" the sentences a bit more together. there are some really short ones that would sound better if you actually took them together to more longer ones. That would make the story a bit more fluently. But that's just a suggestion, so no offence intended. ;)