Reviewer: shepweir always Signed Date: October 26, 2009 - 07:30 pm Title: My love diary-SQUEAL!

Your story has potential. You should continue again. It would be great to know what happened at the party. Are you still a Sparky fan?

Reviewer: Sparky Warrior Signed Date: February 04, 2009 - 07:13 am Title: My love diary-SQUEAL!

Hey, I just read your fic (3-worth chapters) of "Elizabeth's Diary' thing. I have to agree with shannyfish. You seem as though you are an extremely young teenager, no doubt. Maybe just reading and learning off other successful writers may help you improve on your own skills.

Reviewer: shannyfish Signed Date: March 26, 2007 - 11:31 pm Title: My love diary-SQUEAL!

I thought when I was reading the summary for this story, but I was sad to find out that this was rather juvenile. You make Elizabeth out to be a young teenager rather than her actual age. At your age you should not be beta-ing for others, and just barely make it into the age range for most archives. I'd suggest sticking with reading the fanfics on this archive and others...and waiting until your writing has matured before posting.

Reviewer: JJ_Shep Signed Date: August 02, 2006 - 09:45 am Title: February- The month of Love

ok, this is great and at the same time so out of character.... you've got to tell me the trick to make it work, update soon please...

Author's Response: I will tell you all in good time, and I will try to update soon.

Author's Response: I will tell you all in good time, and I will try to update soon.

Reviewer: cloe Signed Date: May 02, 2006 - 05:43 pm Title: My love diary-SQUEAL!

i just loved this fic!!! it's not one of the usual stories, and t's funny! since i just love reading all sorts of diaries, i'm begging you to continoue soon! :)

Author's Response: Already written next chapter! Thanks, When I saw in search no one else had thought of this I decided to do this.

Reviewer: tyger_cub Signed Date: May 02, 2006 - 10:14 am Title: My love diary-SQUEAL!

luv it hun. plz update soon! nice story! hugs n kisses tyger_cub

Author's Response: thanks sis, liked yours too!

Reviewer: kittyja Signed Date: May 02, 2006 - 08:49 am Title: My love diary-SQUEAL!

omg that is sooooo funny and so refreshing to have somit as fun and cheaky as this story up!!!! keep up the gd work and cant wait to see the next chapter

Author's Response: i am glad you liked it. more chapter coming soon!

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