I don't know if you still check your reviews. But I have to share this thought. After reading your first fan fic I can only hope you have continued to keep writing . Your style and story were simply beautiful.
Great story and fitted in perfectly with the rest of the episode. Really good emotion, I can't belive that was your first fanfic! One of the best epiloogue stories I've read. ^Goes to faves.^ I want more!
Wonderful! I really like it. It's so sweet and it's clean, too. I think it's the perfect scene for John/Elizabeth; great idea and great job writing it.
Author's Response: thanks very much. i'm only 16 so i prefer clean fics!!!
Very beautiful story. Absolutely loved the message and the butterfly. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me what you thought. It means a great deal to me as it was my first fanfic! Thanks.