Nicer way of writing Lizzie out without getting her killed off. And very funny at the end, grinning like a maniac here =P Good job!
more more more that cant be the end, how do john and lizbeth keep a long distance relationship going? what happens to atlantis now lizbeth is gone? please dont end it here.
Please don't end it there!!!!!! Please!
Wow! I love this you've got to continue it!!!
awwww this is a sad but hugely cute and wonderful story!!!! nicely done!
Excellent story!! I love all of it, but it's so sad just thinking about it! I have to say that my favorite part has got to be Elizabeth punching Kavanaugh. I have been waiting for that for a loooooong time! That can't be the end! There's gotta be a sequel!
awwwwwwwwww! i luv it! is this the end? i cried! luv amz