BEAUTIFUL. LOVED the sharing of feelings. Too bad tptb did not realize John and Elizabeth were the true magic of Atlantis.
Hmm. Sweet, poetic, romantic... but Sheppard's speech sounds a bit too stilted to really be his.
Author's Response: I know it does. To be perfectly honest, I wrote this before I was really well-versed in SGA as a fandom. So now I can poke holes in the writing, but *at the time* it seemed fine to me. :)
Very poetic touching and romantic. Great for your first fic!!
Author's Response: Thanks... It's just my first Atlantis fic... I've dabbled in all sorts of fiction, fanfiction and poetry.
Geez, I love this. So poetic.