Very cute. Loved that they are getting married.
you did a wonderful job :)
nice work.
Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for reading.
haha lovely :)
awww cute 'girly talk'
Author's Response: Thanks again, I liked that chapter a lot though I realize I could have made it more interesting now.. maybe I will rewrite these stories... hmmm....
haha that was awesome!
i can't believe you thought it was bad?
i liked john's awkwardness. :) lovely.. now onto the next chapters!
Author's Response: lol I wrote this a long time ago, its really weird to look back on it now, if I rewrote it I could do a much better job than I did then. Thanks for the lovely review :D
Very cute idea, dating in Atlantis! On the last sentence: I think you mean "smile" instead of "smiled". I'm excited to read the rest of the series. :-)
Author's Response: thanks i had a lot of fun writing those stories. i think i'm about done though.