It was a pleasure to read your story.
I was hoping he would kiss her. But, I love the way you had them interact when she woke up. Great job.
There's an x-files ep where Mulder remarks that the best way to warm someone up is by getting naked with them into a sleeping bag.
Lovely angst on John's part. And you write a wonderful Carson. ;)
awww, this story is so sweet. Is there gonna be a sequel?
Author's Response: ya know I was thinking of starting a series of stories, but I have yet to decide if I'll do this or do any sequel to this one! we'll see ;) with the summer finale tonight, it's likely that i'll be writing just to get over to overwhelming withdrawl
awwww, happy ending, it's cute and i love it!! ;)
I really love this story. Really can't wait for you to update....soon I hope?!
I'm so nervous! What's gonna happen?! Can't wait!
Great chapter! Love the story, can't wait for more! Update soon!
I like this fic a lot. I hope you continue it soon. :)
Author's Response: thanks so much! i shall continue ;) I try to add at least once a week...or at least shoot for it.
I liked it like I said for Edges your story was sad but it was good and I liked the conflict between Shep and Caldwell.
Omg, this story is great! My heart flew out to John the second he started to cry. Poor boy, losing his loved one. *sniff* I really hope you'll continue soon. ;)