I felt like I was watching an actual episode. Great job...
That was really good! Great characterisation and fits in perfectly with the series. Loved it.
Aww cool story. caldwell was such a jerk at the beginning wasn't he?
Author's Response: I'm not sure what to make of Caldwell. Sometimes he's a jerk, and sometimes he does exactly the right thing. I still haven't made up my mind about him, although I'm leaning towards liking him. :) Glad you liked the story!