I felt like I was watching the great show that Atlantis once was. I miss SPARKY. You brought them to life and made every moment they shared seem real. One of the best ff I have ever read about E & J.
Wonderful story. You've caught the characters so beautifully and this scene fits in so well into canon. I love the 'burdens of command' comment. The part from "you broke your promise" to "I'll try" is absolutely brilliant; I love the dialogue and the description. Excellent story. Thank you!
I can't believe this doesn't have any reviews yet!
Great story and you're right about her confronting him with his promise...