I'm so glad that you finally completed this terrific story! It was worth the wait!
This is great. I think it would have been even better if you'd included scenes from "The Prodigal" though.
WOW...Fabulous and I am so happy to see SPARKY back together where they belong...Can you imagine how crazy the fans would have gone if John had actually walked into the infirmary and there was Elizabeth holding their baby... I think it would have been the favorite episode for a lot of fans. Your ending is far superior. Please update soon. I am so excited about this story. Love the way you brought in all the SG1 folks. And yes Elizabeth should wear RED.
You had me fooled with the beginning of the story but, oh how I wish this is how it had gone on the series! And I certainly wouldn't mind if you wrote about their date! :-)
Ok. That's kind of a weird beginning. How did Sheppard go from wishing Elizabeth was there to having her there & being the father of her baby?
Author's Response: John was wishing Elizabeth could be standing there on the balcony with them, ya know, seeing the proof that they had made it. But considering she had just given birth, little hard. I'm still working out all the details, sorry, didn't mean to confuse anyone!