Excellent story! Looking foward the next Chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review :) Next chapter should be soon!
This story has me totally intrigued. I look forward to reading more. Great start.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Intrigued to know what follows. I'm sure Elizabeth has strong feelings for John but doesn't want to let it show.
Please update soon
Author's Response: :) glad I have you intrigued, thanks for reviewing!
Nice story. And yes, please, continue. I'd love to know if Elizabeth feel the same about John and what could result from their feelings as the story goes on.
Author's Response: cheers :)
John's not being paranoid. The Ongari are paranoid. & crazy it seems. No one should ever deal with paranoid peoples. It never ends well. Good intro. Please continue.
Author's Response: xD yup the Ongari are pretty crazed up. Thanks for the review :)