Reviewer: monkey-in-a-tree Signed Date: July 21, 2010 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 7

:) can't wait for the next chapter, you almost had me in tears with this one!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, almost had my self in tears writing it. New chapter is with my beta but will be delayed slightly as she is on holiday for a few days.

Reviewer: Lizfan Signed Date: July 18, 2010 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter 7

How did Rosa hide Connor from Koyla? Trovell said the child had died. Did Rosa switch Connor with another newborn that had recently died? Or did Trovell lie? I can't help but think that maybe Elizabeth told Rosa to tell John & co. that she was dead so that they wouldn't get themselves killed trying to rescue her, especially since John has Connor to care for. Please update VERY soon.

Author's Response: You will find out how Connor survived in the next chapter. Thanks for the great reviews once again Its people like your self who give me the enthusiasm to keep writing.

Reviewer: Lizfan Signed Date: July 18, 2010 - 08:53 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh thank God John's kid is ok!! I hope that IS John's kid & that he's healthy & that John can get him back to Atlantis without any problems. I'm still not convinced Elizabeth is dead. Rosa needs to show John her grave so he can take her home. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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