An interesting and unique story. It would be great to see a sequel.
This is intriguing. So many questions left unanswered! I really hope you continue! great job!
I'd love to see another chapter... perhaps when John actually meets Elizabeth?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Hoping to get a chapter up if I can find where in my HD I put it. Who knows what will happen next...oh wait a minute, I know and I'll let you know soon. -thanks again for your kind words.
lol. That was so good. I think you should do a sequel. I hope you will. It was amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review. I wasn't sure it I should consider a sequel until your nice words, so yes I'm seriously considering one. Thank you again for taking the time to review.