Great job. Displays your acute awareness of Rodney's temperate and character. I love how you have written this little bit of sparky piece through Rodney's eyes. Excellent work on that even though "sparky" was only mentioned a fraction of your entire fiction. BUT it is effectively written as an observation of the deep, intimate bond shared between the two atlantis leaders. Hope to read more of your stories. This website is like my nicotine patch since scifi canned SGA .
Author's Response: Thanks. I think Rodney's character began to develop a lot. If you compare how he is now to his first appearance in SG-1, then you'll probably see what I mean. It's good to know that I could write Rodney accurately. As for Sparky? It's always going to be sparky, but I thought that seeing it through the eyes of others could be interesting.
this was a great glimpse at Sparky through Rodney's eyes! very nicely done! :)
Author's Response: Thanks.