Nice chapter, really liked the insight into John's fear of becoming a monster, I wished they gone into that more on the show. Keep it coming! :D
Author's Response: Glad to hear that theme's going well; that's one aspect of this story that I'm particularly fond of exploring (Particularly since I'm approaching the introduction of a character who will REALLY give John a lot more to think about than he did in the series...)
Poor Ford. I wish there had been a way to save him. That said, I don't see Sheppard becoming a monster. He's a soldier(a rogue soldier maybe, but a soldier nonetheless), & soldiers do what they have to do to survive & to win. Elizabeth understands that, I'm sure. Awesome story! please update every soon.
Author's Response: He might try to do what he thinks is right, but there's some other details about his history in Pegasus that make his fear of becoming a monster a lot more legitimate than you know at present...