Loved that you wrote this using Teyla's pov - a terrific idea and a wonderful read!
Everytime I see you've posted another fic, I jump up and down gleefully! :) That was as brilliant as the rest. Love the way Teyla see's so much more than all the Earthlings and her accurate comparison of John's frienship for her and love for Elizabeth.
Also loved the way you described the team as a goup of outsiders, never thought of it like that but I can see how they are.
Very heart-warming. *salute*
Wow! Another fantastic fiction from you. That is so incredibly clever of you to write from Teyla's point of view. You captured the essence of the observant Athosian warrior - her tone throughout the piece, the thoughts that would go through her mind upon reflection, the observations of the differences between her and the earth dwellers, the sense of her practical nature caused by years of her home being culled, the small part of her that she has to give up to fit in with the Atlantis team and etc. I love how you employ her point of view to observe John's and Elizabeth's relationship. No small feat! Can't wait for the next fiction from you.