Loved this whole story! Thanks for the happy ending.
Great story, I loved every single chapter.
Thanks for writing it and giving me the chance to read it!
That was brilliant. Thank you for sharing.
Loved it.
Ari
:P
Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun writing it! :D
I've been riveted from the beginning, but this chapter...oh...*sniff* I've pretty much cried through the whole thing! It's beautifully written.....
Author's Response: Thanks, it was really hard to write but I was pleased with the result. Glad you liked it!
Outstanding and powerful. I feel wonderful after reading it. Here is the perfect story for the next SGA movie. It has everything drama, action, humor, and romance.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate that, I was so angry at TPTB when they took Elizabeth off the show!
*thumbs up*
Awesome job!!
The only thing I'm missing though is Elizabeth being reunited with her family and how they would react to John being there with her.
But otherwise: awesome job!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I did consider putting more in about Elizabeth's return to Earth but I wanted most of the focus to be on the two of them coming home to Atlantis. Glad you liked it though!
Wipes away the tears. Beautiful and heart wrenching, and so perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D I wondered if it was to soppy so its great to know no one found it overly emotional!
YES!!!! Thank you for letting John live!
Author's Response: You're welcome! I just couldn't bear to kill him after everything they went through! :D
OMG! NO!!! You don't really let him die, do you? Oh please not! *isbeingmajorlyupset* Write soon again. I HAVE to know what's going to happen next.
BTW: This is such an awesome story so far. I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks! l'll try and finish the next chapter soon and put you out of you misery! :D Glad you liked it!
Great story, but John has to survive, Elizabeth will never forgive herself if he dies. Anxiously awaiting next chapter. Well written.
Author's Response: Thanks, lets hope Elizabeth doesn't get too angsty, as for John surviving...
OMG Please don't kill off John!! I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try and publish the next chapter as quickly as possible!
Nice beginning. I hope you find the rest of the chapter. Wonder what will happen when they find him. He'll never go back without her.
Author's Response: No he won't. Managed to find the rest of the chapter, I'll try and post it soon!
No, not a boring chapter at all. I liked it a lot.
I have one thing though... In the first part, where Jack snaps out an "Oh for goodness sake!"... He would more likely have snapped out an "Oh fer cryin' out loud!" instead, because that's one of his trademark saying, especially when dealing with an exasperating situation like that. Just a FYI. But cool he got to go off-world (or off-city) and got to put his Ancient gene to good use again.
Now to see what happens, now that they're just under that replicator battle ship.
Author's Response: Thanks! Your review was really detailed and constructive and I'd prefer if you tell me what you really think, otherwise I just end up guessing!
I think you're probabley right about Jack, one thing thats really hard about fanfiction is keeping the characteristaion and this is one of my first stories so it's hard trying to see what fits the characters. So thanks for telling me.
If there's anything else you think is out of place tell me, I love hearing what you think!
I absaloutely love it please write more. =)
Author's Response: Thanks! Really glad you like it, I was beginning to worry, haven't had any reviews for ages. The next chapter should be up soon!
Aww, poor John! Please keep going!
luv
K
Author's Response: I will!
Wel it's certainly heating up. well done and keep them coming
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Oh can't wait tho see where you're going with this. Good start. Update soon
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to keep the chapters going as quickly as possible.