Love, love, LOVE this saga! Just excellent! I'm really looking forward to the sequel!
I hope SGC destroys the Aschen for good. How long until they find Wier's & Sheppard's son? Please update very soon.
Author's Response: I have the rest of the story already written, so I will update soon.
Welcome back!!! Thanks for the update, I would never have guessed the Ashen. Darn cliffhanger....
I think the Lanteans are going to clean up the filth that is the rogue NID that the SGC or government just don't want too. All of them. Could Aras have just found Richard Woolsey? Did Richard get shot by the good/Lanteans or bad/NID guys? Did Woolsey get shot to encourage the government to want to destroy Atlantis? Does Earth even know the gate address to Atlantis? That I figure is one thing they didn't share with earth. I hope Aras finds someone to help him soon - one of the good guys.
Author's Response: Well, Woolsey's situation is certainly escalating things and Aras is a resourceful little guy. You'll just have to see. Thanks for the review.
So has the SGC not noticed it is missing some weapons? Is Elizabeth being offered Ascension? Is the woman the other old/Elizabeth? Also is Ziva David sister to Segen David?
Author's Response: You're gonna see, though in some of your ideas you're not entirely wrong.
AWESOME story! It just pulls you in and doesn't let go! A terrific read - really looking forward to future updates!!
Author's Response: Thanks.
I love how you depicted the depths of Liz's love for John and how that was fostered through the hardship on the first couple of years on Atlantis. I also love how Meredith has changed through circumstances and his relationship with his sister is depicted through her conversation with him. Well done. I wonder where this story will take us. Will they ever revert slightly back to their "old" selves? Next chapter, please!
Author's Response: Thank you. As for them reverting back, you'll see. Their core is still the same, but their experiences are different from canon. Five years are a long time. Some things change and some things stay the same. I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as possible, but it'll take some time.
Another good chapter and the storm is definitely getting rougher. Please update like right soon please
Author's Response: Yep. It's really getting stormier. As for updates...I'll try, but college is almost upon me again...so...
very good fic
Author's Response: Thanks
Wow, can't see Carson or Elizabeth ever racing like that, but it's cool the spin you've put on their characters, like you've proved being out there for five years would change them.
Love the fact you've brought Hailey into it, she fits perfectly in the story.
Keep writing, I'm desperate to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks. And, yeah, Carson and Elizabeth are a little bit more gung-ho but that's to be expected after five years in Pegasus. Great to know that you liked it.
Oh love it love it. And you have brought in NCIS,another programme I'm addicted to. Really enjoying where your taking this. Please update- like some- as in can't wait any longer PLEASE
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, I brought in NCIS. Though I should warn you, it will not really focus on NCIS. You could say that it is a bit of a mini-crossover.
Loving it, really interesting to see them all meeting up with their families. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. I know it's a little slow going now, but it'll pick up speed in the next few chapter.
Yet another fantastic chapter! Can't wait for the meeting with the president... hopefully he will not be a Kinsey clone.
And of course Atlantis is their home... it is afterall where they've laid their hats! hehehe
Very much looking forward to the next bit.
Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter is already written and is currently being refined by me. As for the meeting with the president... wait and see.
Alrighty then! Now that I've finally gotten some time to read this, I've got to say how much I'm enjoying it!
Loving the relationship you've got going between Elizabeth and John and also Jack and Sam... so caring, but also recognising the boundaries they have to keep for the smooth running of Atlantis.
I am wondering how far Jack is willing to stick his neck out for Atlantis though. He's a career military man and knows how to play the game, but I see that he cares deeply for these people and I guess he'd try to do anything in his power to keep them all together.
I cracked up at Daniel's reaction to the coffee and cocoa plants!! So Danny :D
I really liked your description of the Tour they all took through the city. I could picture everything they were looking at and experiencing.
I haven't got anything bad to say about this fic, only that a couple of words were in the incorrect tense.
Other than that, FANTASTIC fic Atri, and I'm very much looking forward to the next bit. Tan
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's good to know that you like it. As for the incorrect tense... Sorry. English isn't my mother tongue and I try to get the grammar and spelling as good as possible but sometimes errors still occur. Hopefully, I'll get the next chapter out soon. But college has begun again and it'll probably take some time.
Very well written, and I truly do enjoy reading this story. There is one thing that I believe should be taken into slightly greater consideration and that is the response Atlantis has to opening its dialog with Earth. While recognizing that Atlantis has less people then Earth it does have the stronger negotiating position as it is already well established in Pegasus and has enough resources to thrive (according to the what you have written). What it could use, but does not need, from Earth include use of a larger spacecraft (unless Atlantis has the Orion), more personal, a more powerful power source (if available... ZPM or Asgard power source?). Above all else Atlantis must clearly assert its independence from Earth, and seek its recognition not as a outpost of the IOA but as a sovereign entity in its own rights
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Don't worry. The status of Atlantis will soon be decided.
Fantastic story,just keeps getting better and better. All of SG1 and Atlanteans are written so like there characters, it's easy to imagine your are watching them. Please Please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks. I tried to make the characters as realistic as possible. The next chapter should be up this week.
What an intriguing story. The change in the character's behavior is enjoyable. Hope you will be updating very soon. Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks. I just hope I didn't make Rodney too OC.
Lovely. Can't wait to see what happens when SG1 and the Atlantis expedition finally meet. Love how you have brought SG1 into it. Please update soon
Author's Response: Yes. It will be certainly an interesting meeting.
Ooh nice!! Can't wait to read more. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm working on it.