Reviewer: Lizfan Signed Date: July 11, 2009 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'd love a sequel. Please?

Reviewer: From the Stars Signed Date: June 20, 2009 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

John working for the Wraith? Thats definitley a twist,.
The end was brilliant, I feel so sorry for him though. Sequel?
Oh, and was looking at your disclaimer, I'm in NZ too!

Reviewer: krisrussel Signed Date: March 28, 2009 - 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1

wow... just wow... so dark... and so... wow...
This line just gave me goosebumps: The Wraith can be a pretty practical people – most farmers I know are.

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