If only tptb would realize that SPARKY was the best story line SGA could ever have.
Read that three times now and I'm blown away with how brilliant it was! The emotion Elizabeth was feeling totally made sense to the episode and point of time in the series. After a couple of flashback TPTB never really went into her and Simon anymore but the way you explained her reaction and her and John's relationship was really good and believable.
Read some of your other stories and loved them as well but that one definitley goes to faves!
I like the way you convey Elizabeth's emotions here and her lack of emotion shown on the show. Very good characterization.