Wow. I can definitely see improvement in each and every new chapter that takes place. You are growing as a writer and are adding new feeling, emotions, actions and words. These few steps will come to make you better as a writer. Well done! As for this story: Great job! I enjoyed this chapter. So far, I've read half way through this chapter, but I had to review before I forgot. Anyways.. BACK TO READING!
I've come to really enjoy this story now. And thanks for continuing to write. *Proud Salute*
Author's Response: Thansk for the review and glad to hear you see an improvement. Think new beta is helping. Glad your enjoying the story
Why do I get the feeling that the IOA set Elizabeth up to get raped & paid Simon to do it so that they could have her removed & keep her away from Atlantis? I wouldn't put it past them. I hope Simon doesn't get loose to hurt Elizabeth again. Having him there at Stargate Command for questioning is insane. There's no reason why they couldn't have conducted the questioning somewhere else.
Author's Response: You would think so wouldn't you. Next chapter should be posted in next couple of days. Thanks for loyal following of this fic