lol well you did warn in the story notes that this was unusual =P good job though, you explained everything well? ^.^
Author's Response: That I did... ;)rnThanks...
I want more! ;^)
Author's Response: and you will get more...soon... ;)
Hehe, nice and short! Do we really need much more input to what John and Elizabeth will be doing instead of sleeping? =P Again, an awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Ahm...no? ;) Thanks!
Good story so far, but how is the evening going to end? :) *waiting for an update soon*
Author's Response: Thank you!rnWell...I just uploaded the 2nd chapter, but the real action will be in the 3rd ;)
This is really good! Nice missing scene, thanks for posting =]
Author's Response: Thank you and you're welcome ;)
Great one and I love it... nice little twist about their lives in Atlantis ;^)
I'm hoping for more!
Author's Response: Thank you...rnI'll post the next chapter soon...