*sniff* god, that is beautiful.
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you, I'm glad you liked!
Don't let it end like this! Does he fully come out of the nanite-induced coma? Does he find Elizabeth again? Please give us another chapter!
Author's Response: I wrote this a while ago for YotS and I hadn't really planned a sequel but if the plot bunny gets me then you never know, thanks for the review.